Let it Rain

a lover has drifted away. ok ok I have to admit this has nothing to do with me, just a piece so I could attach David Nail's song. Just trying to let people know this talented guy is out there, so.

Let it Rain

her soft lips no longer

whisper I love you in my ear

she no longer feels that way

is exactly what I fear

times and things have changed

someone else is in her dreams

while I lay here holding back

I wonder if she hears my screams

she has always been everything to me

though maybe I have not shown this

afraid to show and now I'm lost

no longer do I taste her kiss

now the tears are falling down

I know she can hear my pain

she turns her back and pretends

guess I'll just let it rain

Gomer LePoet....

Author's Note

Reviews

[just is]

Such a sad poetic piece, but nicely expressed.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Sorry for your tears .. I've cried an Ocean myself .. When Love leaves, it hurts .. I am sure she is hurting too ..

This is a different kind of write for you .. it has heart ..

Jasmine ..

[?]

This is interesting...SAD...heartfelt...tearful...painful...emotive piece..which makes it a well written..heartfelt piece.
BTW...I love David Nail

Somtimes what we fear is not necessarily the truth...fear brings on those sometime untrue thoughts...Fear breads fear, dear...I bet that not only does she hear your screams...she feels your pain as well hers...well written piece David

[Cherrie]

You created a wonderful poem. A topic we have all experienced on one side or the other, maybe even both.