Nothing Too Serious

huh? what?

Nothing Too Serious

well my knees are knocking

and my eyes so blurry

think I jumped out of bed

in too big a hurry

but don't get excited

I'm not delirious

I'm sure I'll be alright

it's nothing too serious

and just why are you here

have you gone crazy

wasting your time on me

you know I'm rather lazy

I have no ambition

and several mental conditions

but I sure like to dance

to songs of my own rendition

I found a new sponsor

said she'd get me straight

I asked her are you sure Doc

you sure it's not too late

now I have a crush on her

she is so mysterious

I hope to keep it together

nothing too serious

I'm glad you are my friend

but I may forget tomorrow

the memory is going

do you have any money I can borrow

I think I heard a knock on the door

now I am really curious

hope they're not coming for me

maybe I should take it more serious

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

While I like this piece in general, in all honesty, the rhythm of this piece sucks big time.
3rd piece of the day and I think I rushed the thoughts without the scrutiny I like to give.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Laughing .. umm .. the meter's doing a dance of its very own but the rhythm's pretty serious! Last four lines made me laugh aloud ..

[Kim's Poems]

I really enjoyed this, very well written.
rhyme scheme and flow is right on.
Awesome write

[Leslie Philibert]

Funny,good poem.Loved the line..do you have any money....Nice to read poems that are amusing,don`t think too many people write them.Good work.

[?]

I thought the rhythm was rather good, hey but what do i know. I do know I like this was very much. Kinda peppy tune. Cute, such a fun piece. Rhyme is right on dude. lol
A wonderful fun piece Gomer

[Kim]

I really like this write, ponderful and cute really. Love the rhyme and flow so awesome. I love this.