Filling the Void

a big empty space left behind

Filling the Void

my hours are now spent trying to fill the void

the huge vacuum of space left behind

going through the motions like an android

stumbling with my thoughts feeling so blind

the passion and the flames are memories now

that is all that they could ever be

need to find me a new direction somehow

but I still think of her I still think of me

I look all around and see beauty abound

reflections of the beauty I once knew

her voice such a perfect sound

filling the void left by you

David Nelson ....

Reviews

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awwww David, this is so beautifully written and written with such a heart full of emotion and saddness. David, I feel ya, in this one. You have written and expressed this saddness, this longing, this emptiness so well as you have all your work.
I always love reading what you have written. Some make me laugh, some smile, some chuckle, some make me even scratch this blondes head, and some a single tear may drop and others the tears flow.
Thanks David.

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I can feel this write and teh emotions through out.
This is so well written and expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime must find something to replace what we missed or lost. I like the way you find peace in the world around you.
'I look all around and see beauty abound
reflections of the beauty I once knew
her voice such a perfect sound
filling the void left by you "
Thank you for your excellent poetry.
Coyote