Is It Wrong?

Order in the court here comes the Judge

Is It Wrong?

Is it wrong for me to want you so

and yet I cannot help but want you more

is it wrong for me to want to chase away

the wolves who clamor at your door

is it wrong for me to have a jealous heart

when suitors glance your way

it's not my trust in you that makes me weak

but it seems to happen every day

the gnarling teeth that snap so loud

just when you turn your pretty head

the passion that you reveal so deep

attracts monsters from amongst the living dead

is it wrong that I will always dream aloud

of you lying here so close by my side

in your silken thin robes of pearl white

your treasures veiled slightly but never do you hide

is it wrong for me to want to run my fingers

through your long golden hair so fine

to softly lay my kisses upon your lips

to wish that you were only mine

if being wrong requires punishment

then I certainly must be so very wrong

because my heart aches so much for you

and it has so for very very long

Gomer LePoet....

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

What a beautiful love poem. I just love it love it. It's the way you want someone to miss you and feel about you. Excellent!!! Wonderfully penned.

[Joshua Donahue]

Omg. This is the PERFECT poem for my current situations with someone!! I truly felt like I was in the writer's head on this one, because I could definitely relate on so many levels. What a masterpiece, the way you took the average concept couples face and turned it into something a little bit different. Flawless!

[?]

Well now guess that would all depend on circumstance. lol

Nice poem Gomer, can feel the longing, even the saddness of ones heart breaking in a since.
There will always be monsters. Cause monsters are just that, monsters. Whether they be in people or in our minds.

[The Analog Kid]

Sense of longing here...nice use of the repitition.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of your words. Hard to share anything we love and value. I like the many questions in the poem. The description made the words come alive. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote