Have I told You

 

 

Have I told you

Its like I've had VanWinkle's disease ,

suddenly you' have awakend my mind

I suddenly notice, this beatutiful woman

where have I been, took me too long to find

you've been standing, right here beside me

must have been keeping, my head in the sand

now all the momories are returning

if I reach out, will you take my hand

I can't understand, why I make it so hard

I can't seem to say, the words that I feel

the thought's been there, seems I hide my card

you've been waiting for me to shut up and deal

have I told you lately, how much I love you

have I said to you, your still in my dream

I'm a such a fool to have gambled you'd be here

I have forgotten that we are a team

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

to speak your heart now thats a leap of faith,

[Devons]

"Don't it always seem to go
that you don't know what you got til it's gone?"
A good-humoured, honest, and therefore more real piece of love poetry in a generic sense. Puts across its message better this way, as though the words were just being spoken "off the cuff" in passing one day. A familiar, kind of layman's tone, that works just right.

[?]

WOW!!! This is so beautiful. A love that was lost, wanting to be found again.
Just reach out, it will be ok

[deeps]

I can't understand, why I make it so hard
I can't seem to say, the words that I feel
the thought's been there, seems I hide my card
you've been waiting for me to shut up and deal

Simply outstanding lines here, This is a remarkable write.
I like this alot.