Gambale

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Gambale

he comes from the land down under

a golden axe is in his hand

creating his centrifugal funk

all across his note drenched land

he completed his Italian job

sending everyone high fives

while schmoozing in the white room

high powered electric jives

Nunzia was by his side

he was his right hand man

except of course when making love

inside Lydia's love van

one of the great explorers

of this final wild frontier

like a crouching jaguar

keeping his mind so clear

the magical slinging weapon

faster than an arrow

the vibrations pierced through the skin

down inside the marrow

the thunder current crashing

this pathfinder with attitude

it was dawn over the Nullarbor

at crusing altitude

conducting naughty business

for all those who seek to hear

Kuranda is the place you'll find

his vision so perfectly clear

for his right of passages

a little charmer flying by

a present for the future

noteworker on a natural high

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Liza]

very smooth read
every line pleasantly surprised me
i enjoyed reading your imagination and dedication

[KatiePie]

I loved reading this, it was a truly enjoyable piece and the flow was simple and beautiful. There are some words in here I didn't understand but I'll google it in a bit. Anyways, I loved reading this, really I did, from the first line to the last my eyes were glued in, because your writing is so intriguing it captured me. Great write and keep up the good work! ^_^
-Cathrine

[deeps]

creating his centrifugal funk..what does centrifugal mean?
I enjoyed this write, very well written and very poetic.