One Good Reason

Country love begging song

 

One Good Reason

you said you would be leaving soon

you had to make a change,

although you still cared for me

something inside felt strange

this need to start somewhere new

the urge to get away,

I should not try to understand

but it gets stronger every day

you say to me my loving friend

give me one good reason why

do you promise to love me to the end

and will you never make me cry

I'll tell you this my lovely miss

I will never treat you wrong,

I'm searching for the perfect words

to tell you this in a song

with God as my witness

I will always be true to you,

I can't live without your love

no I cant live without your love

did I give you reason enough

do you find my answers pleasin

can I prove to you I am tough

did I give you one good reason

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ruth]

Really good hon :)
Moving, emotions have to declare such as this at times!
xx

[Dupree]

This is preety good, though I have to admit you have done better and I personally expect better from you. Keep writing, my friend.

- Dupree

[Liza]

this song would definitely leave someone wanting more
begging for more of a song
interesting and insightful

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. When we need evident. I believe the love had dispersed into the wind and ain't coming back. i like the poem. I had a few conversation like this one. I watch them hit the door and I was waving good bye. A excellent poem. I like the story.
Coyote

[ShaneBerry]

great poem, but when you inbed a song to it, it takes away fro it, a poem itself is music, do you listen to two songs at the same time? of cousre not! lol, then it gets all jumbled up Xp, but the poem was very good

[Color Me Gone]

My only problem with your writing is that I want to hear the music that goes along with it, otherwise, I make up my own rhythm to your lyrics ~

[?]

This is a awesome song Dave, I think you are an amazing writer

[deeps]

I like this song, It's awesome.