Jail Break

A party with my poet friends

 

Jail Break

just got outa jail, did my 30 days

it's the third time this year, they gathered me up

told me I better, better change my ways

singing on the corner, with a large coffee cup

trying to make a livin, trying to keep it real

but they got some stupid law, says that I can't

saved enough money, so I'll tell you the deal

having a party tonite, come help me rant

yeah it's a jail break, let's sing and dance

let me see you shake that booty, my friend

Dutch is in the corner, rapping bout his pants

and Analog is dancin, like there is no end

Darfishy has a sore throat, but she's wigglin too

never would have guessed, her to be so nimble

Chloe's on the stage, she's over the flu

drinking a coctail from a plastic thimble

Desert Dreamer, is tapping her twinkle toes

while she goes around, checking out plants

ettorney, a little to wound bumped his nose

and now he's just ripped, a hole in his pants

Devons is trying, to do the fox trot

you know how those crazy Brits can be

he and Gandre' argued a lot

but they made up now, as you can plainly see

Kit is in the kitchen, cookin up some snacks

Zombiikill and Poppy, walkin the runway

Coyote is howling, and checkin out some tracks

and Not Your Typical, is dancin in the hallway

Wicahpi and Sera are coming thru the door

Ro-mon has a boombox, sittin on his shoulder

Neva glad you made it back, from the liquor store

MsWizard looks sexy with her cigarette holder

I really am glad, that you all could make it

I know more are coming they are dipping in the lake

we gonna party all nite, we're gonna shake it and bake it

me and my poet friends, are on a jail break

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

Create a MySpace Playlist at MixPod.com

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I could use a jailbreak. I got a 180 acre of Native American land on Lake Superior. Could be a good place to hide out. A very fun poem to read tonight. Thank you.
Coyote

[The Analog Kid]

This is fun and a hoot! You rock, GLP! Love it. You are an awesome partner in crime!

[zombiikillah666]

whooooo hoooooo.....
breaking out of jail with
a bazooka..and some bubblelicious
gum!!!! were hardcore gangsters for reals. ! xD
love it.!!!!

[Ruth]

LMAO
Hon, this is AWESOME! LOL
Love it!
Hugsssssss
xx

[Desert Dreamer]

As I was reading this I heard "Jailbreak" by Thin Lizzy in my head, knowing that you might add a song to this, and boy was I wrong. Thanks for letting me dance with everyone and see the plants in your poem. I wonder what poetic plants look like?

[Albatross]

I love it when you incorporate your friends list in your poetry! This does read like a song, it has such a fun pace!

[Angel's Lady]

You do write the most delightful and witty things!

[MissWordSmith]

sounds like a song! loved it! it was great fun to read!
thanks for the mention!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Oh, this is one fun read and so many comical lines..The part about Dutch rappin about his pants and ettorney bumping his nose and Desert Dreamer checking plants ,, the funniest to me is Devons and Gandre arguing LoL... made me laugh !

Good rhythm and beat thanks kindly for giving us this treat!

Peace

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I want to break out too! Wonderful!