And the Winner is...

random thought streams

 

And The Winner Is

competition

trying to get ahead

fighting for our lives

can we make a difference

searching

what's the right way

is this all just a dream

think of a way to explain

dreaming

will I find the answer

is my mind really this feeble

sometimes it is just a bit to much

winning

is there really a winner

just what did you win

show me the prize you won

future

is there an ending

when will the end occur

will we know or go to waste

faith

faith in made up stories

I believe in the maker

but just what is the purpose

knowledge

boy is this a joke

some think they know

what fools just take a look around

caring

for every living creature

this is what God is all about

this is what I feel is right

aliens

we search for them

look into our own world

they are everywhere you see

beauty

what a beautiful world

look at everything you see

look into the mirror

winner

you and I

I will raise my hand

and the winner is....

Gomer LePoet

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ruth]

We always, as humans, care for the self and not others ey?
Comes a time, when we have to decide against that, we are all connected, one's downfall can be another's!
Excellent poem hon
xx

[Desert Dreamer]

Very rarely do we win in this world as is, where the future is uncertain and we are slaves to a system that serves the corporations. I have found hope in your poem...I wish there was caring in the world for all living things, all the beauty in this world deserves to be recognized and protected. I like your poem.

[Wicahpi]

If we have love and love of spirit then
we win ...

You've made quite the statement here.

[deeps]

Simply outstanding here. I like this write alot. The song choice is wonderful as well. This is very well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Ain't many winners in this world. But we must stay positive and go forward with hope for our children. I hope for better days. A excellent poem.
Coyote