Guitars and Women

comparable beauty visited

 Guitars and Women

Slender neck, nice rounded bottom, and adjustable knobs,

musical sounds carress your ear, you can make this baby hum

take good care of her, lots of polish, not like unwanted hobs,

protect her from the elements, unless you are realy dumb

got to keep her happy, or the tune will be oh so sour,

the blues will roll right out of her, so sad it will make you weep

if she gets sweaty, from playing hard, rest for half an hour,

if she's screaming way too loud, you'll never be able to sleep

every night before you rest, of her praises you should sing,

this instruction is so important, a very important part

don't strum so very very hard, or you might break a string,

don't ever take her for granted, or you will break her heart

yes, guitars are like women, most beautiful in every way,

they'll be your friend for ever, if you treat them oh so kind

let every word you think, be touched by her hand each day,

and she will reward you, body, soul and mind

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

dont forget you can click on the video above. this particular cut only has photos and not actual video, but is still kinda cool to watch.

[Dutch Jr.]

A woman and a guitar... cool comparison; a metaphorical poem that captures the beauty of both of them. Nice job.

[J.Black]

I play the guitar, so I really digged this! Love it in fact.

[SamBug]

This was cute. I liked it!

[Wicahpi]

makes sense.
My most prized possession, however, is my honey's guitar.
I guess you could say that I treat it as a man would treat a woman,
or should and am very protective of it. Silly, but then not so silly.
I cherish it as I cherish him.

[The Analog Kid]

Good poem from a musician's POV. Great use of the curvy guitar that weeps, etc! Write on GLP...

[deeps]

This is wonderful and cute

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job nice.........................................................work

[zombiikillah666]

i want to learn to play the guitar!
*stomps foot*
i like this alot.
oh so sweet... (:
*applauds**