Those Lips

Follow up to the fine lady that inspired Those Eyes

 

Those Lips

I was sitting in a booth at Boomer's coffee shop,

it was two a.m. And I was ready to drop,

working my a*s off, Just trying to get ahead,

but going in circles, it's going to my head

sitting here sipping a cup of Cafe' LaWut,

pulling drags off a stale cigarette butt,

in walks this redhead, long legs and all,

set me straight up, hit my head on the wall

long red hair all the way down her back,

near 6 foot tall, with quite a stack,

legs from the bottom, all the way to the top,

could feel my bottom jaw start to drop

looking like a dork couldn't help but stare,

think to myself, she's not wearing underwear.

bright green eyes that sparkled like stars,

and here I am looking, like a creature from Mars

but she looked my way, gave a wink and a smile,

she must be crazy, or been drinking a while,

her cute pug nose fit her face just right,

I could look at her for the rest of the night

the thing I noticed most out of all this charm,

long hair, long legs, a smile so warm,

killer eyes, perfect teeth and shapely hips

I really had this urge to kiss those lips.

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[?]

Wow Gomer, did ya? did ya ever get to kiss those lips? wow
This is so wonderful, I am sure that the one that inspired this and Those eyes appreciates every word you write about her.
Love this one alot
mwah

[Brian Kraklau]

just beautiful, i love this piece, for that love you describe almost is identical to the maden that walked into my world, not so tall however but all the same, just beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

Those woman who can steal our soul and mind with a glance. Poem is outstanding. Your description made the woman come alive. The ending was very good. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Hey, Gomer, I really liked this one! I made me laugh and made me wonder whether you ever did kiss those lips, after you stopped looking like "a Creature from Mars," I mean. I agree with Kit Kat, "Ha, Ha!!"

[deeps]

Ha! Ha! This is so cute and such an enjoyable read.
This is so dang amazing. I liked this one alot.
Very well written.