Your Mistake

Rock song lament

 

Your Mistake

I got this from Sister Hazel,

before she left this town,

five young lads from gainsville,

jumpin up and down

asked if I would join them,

out on the weary road,

you know this is what I wanted,

to carry this heavy load

you said that you would wait,

wait for my return,

not sure if that's a good idea,

for that I have concern

you are such a brave soul,

you give more than you take,

I don't want to be the one,

who you call your mistake

I am the cosmic traveler,

from moon to star I jump,

going where the beams may lead,

could wind up in the dump

yes it worries me that you concede,

your future is as stake,

no I don't want to be the one,

that you call your mistake

Gomer LePoet

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ruth]

Worrying about the future so much can destroy!
This is great love:)
I like you story telling quality to poetry too!
xx

[Desert Dreamer]

Perfect subject for a rock song, a musician on the road, the "cosmic traveler". I know I would not choose to wait for someone, it would either be I go with or if it works out when the musician came back then great, but I am not one to wait. I suppose I live life in the moment. This is a nice lyric.

[deeps]

This is aweosme I really enjoyed this.
Perfect flow, i love the rhyme scheme.
This is amazing I would like to hear this one.