On My Face

Parody on Facebook

 

On My Face

Got something you want to say,

write it on my face

Want me to know what u did today,

write it on my face

Searching for Jupiter tonite,

look out into space

Hoping to make things seem right,

write it on my face

Advancements, promotions,

just write it on my face

Untimely demotions,

you can write it on my face

Directions to your house warming,

write it on my face

Comments you feel harming,

don't leave them on my face

Mouth speaking out of turn,

leaving egg on my face

You wanting me to return,

leave it on my face

Severe pain deep down inside,

write it on my face

Trying really very hard to hide,

don't write it on my face

Old friends echoes from the past,

write in on my face

New friends added to the cast,

write that on my face

Dreams wished and never reached,

you can see that on my face

Hearts broken, promises breached,

see the tears run down my face

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dupree]

It's a great piece full of emotions. I am sorry I didn't read it earlier. Thank you for sharing it

[Ruth]

Gomer, hon, this is one of your most touching poems:)
The marks on the face, there to stay, there to scar, there to remind, absorning each character you meet!
Excellent!
xx

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Well i don't care for facebook but i do like this poem..
It is comical but also sad...
Dreams wished and never reached,

you can see that on my face


Hearts broken, promises breached,

see the tears run down my face


Too sad!

I enjoyed this David but sad! And funny so i guess it evens out.

Chloe

[Desert Dreamer]

Great poem about facebook and your face, I like the image I am left with, and that is of tears running down my facebook page. How fun!

[The Analog Kid]

Funny. FB is a doble -edged sword. GLP!

[deeps]

I really like this one alot.
I can feel the bitter sweet emotions pour out in this.
This is wonderful.