Constant Craving

cravings to write, cravings to live life - thanks to Heterodynemind and K D Lang and all my poet friends for inspiration

 

Constant Craving

anyone who knows me,

knows how much I love to write

tell sad stories, tell bad jokes,

writing late at night

I have this constant craving,

to talk to all my friends

saying things I want to say,

so deep, sometimes I get the bends

sometimes my words are good,

sometimes my thoughts are bad

I mean to entertain the world,

make everybody glad

that they took this winding path,

to read my words of rhyme

not feel disappointed,

that they wasted all their time

If I can make just someone happy,

make them curl a lip

make them not feel so guilty,

that they ate those chips n dip

inspire some young new poet,

to reach out to my space

throw out words that bring me joy,

yes throw them in my face

I have other poet friends,

who inspire me to keep trying

if I said I do not care,

you know that I'd be lying

 

Sunflower comes to mind,

the words are so amazing

I read the poems from her pen,

once again I have constant craving

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

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cravings to write, cravings to live life - thanks to Heterodynemind and K D Lang and all my poet friends for inspiration

Reviews

[?]

WOW! How did I miss this from a year ago? ... Well you've done it Gomer, my lips curling..just a lil.. So need a lip curl today..ty
Such a wonderful pen you have my wonderful friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Without writing I would have no fun. I like the internet. We can communicate with the world. If we don't joke, laugh or create a chaos. What would we do? A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Classic song actually love! lol
A craving, that is never quenched, words that dance in the veins, sums the poem and sng up lol
Huugs xx

[Liza]

constant craving can make us feel like we are never full yet we count on the craving to keep us inspired and productive...great write!

[zombiikillah666]

awwwh. i really liked this. (:
&& i want sum chips and dip!! xD

[Albatross]

Words have a power of their own, whether we know it or not, we inspire and are inspired by others and (hopefully) ourselves. The only iffy thing about this piece is that you began to capitalize the first couple of stanza's, but all the rest are lower case. Otherwise, the flow and conversational feel of your poem is sweeet :D

[The Analog Kid]

GLP,

I like your conversational style. I know of what you speak! Nice write.

[Desert Dreamer]

I know this feeling of craving to write...I have to write or I go crazy, it is life for me. You have expressed this feeling very well, also the way we inspire each other when we share our words. Great song choice.

[SamBug]

LOVE IT!

[Emmy]

I loved it