Deliciously Tempestuous

fire and rain

Deliciously Tempestuous

a fire burns inside her heart

sending waves of passion all aglow

impetuous intensity

when she arrives you surely will know

her eyes will melt your very soul

leaving you wanting more

but you cannot contain her love

this beauty remains forever free

her truculent tenderness

spins your heart a whirl

like the roses petals

belie her thorny prick

her untamed desires

will leave a feverish desire for her touch

Gomer Lepoet...

Reviews

[Jeff]

I've known a few women that could fit this description.

[Gomer LePoet]

Amen Jeff, and I like to meet a few more - thanks for your words

[M.E.Lyle]

I think I know this girl; not really, but maybe sometime in the past. This is one of the best pieces I've read, and with so few words. I just listened to a few of your tunes too. How have you not found a group yet? Your talent abounds the limit of what should be fair. I don't know what that means.

[Gomer LePoet]

LOL-thanks for the comments, you are too kind. well I must admit I gave up looking the past year for a band, my life warrants very little time for more that some jam or maybe 1 day a week. my brother is 2 times better than I and he hasn't collected a paycheck or played in a bad in many more years than I.

[M.E.Lyle]

That's too bad. The public is deprived of some great talent.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some temptations are worst the pain and misery. A good dance in the night could cause pain later. But later in a life. Hurt less. I enjoyed the description and tale. I knew a few in my young days. Who took a lot and left good memories. Thank you for the amazing poem my friend.
Coyote

[Gomer LePoet]

Thank you Mr Coyote. you are a gracious gentleman.