Choco Bars?

Choco Bars?

A Poem by gombeggar

Aerated candies

What does that say?

Filling in the spaces with vacuum

Eh gads, what ever for?

All for the money

Saving the demand of supply while enlarging the space

When ya think about it...that's kinda funny

© 2012 gombeggar


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I love this! You put so well what I thought about the "aerated" candies. I love the line "Eh gads" As for me, I want it straight up- undiluted with air, hehe. Good job!

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Added on April 16, 2012
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gombeggar
gombeggar

hazleton, PA



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i'm a writer, older then my years, younger then as well...i'm a fool and a giant...not usually on the same days more..

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