Ich, Geschirrlave

Als der Tag lang ist
So geht der Sanitär-
Blub, blub ... burble Gurgeln und somit mehr
So sagte wieder
Als ich swirl den Bach runter
Und weil ich mich zu verschwinden
Und an anderer Stelle Ich bin sicher, dann durch die Natur der Dinge, wieder
laufen schiere
In Schwerkraft lenke ich
Als ich aus der Dinge, über Reim
Und längst über die Anfänge des Auslauf verschwunden
In Urzeiten
Ich habe keine Marker an meinem schwarzen Rückstand Ende stehen
Und meiner Liste wirbelnden Spin
So spricht der Spüle Wasser verloren

 

Fer der fatherland, ja!

Reviews

[Emily B]

english would ruin it

[gombeggar]

oh, if u look down in mah log it's posted in english 2

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

WTF is the crap foreign s**t? Jog on

[gombeggar]

go pout elsewere

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Ok, my google translating obsessed, compodre ;)

[gombeggar]

hmm...u r the one with a sudden obsession here...and feel free to stop ur obsession with me anytime...or continue to post for al 2 see how childish, inept and troubled u r by me and my work...go on...keep letting everyone here see how low your self-esteem obviously is that u must keep on pestering me due 2 the fat tha u didn't lke a coment i made regarding work u pushed on me to review and how shattered and distraught u obviously have become over things because of yer underdeveloped child-like excuse for a mind...go on...keep posting so ALL can see YOUR insecurities as u rant and cry like the child u show us all that u r...keep it up and enjoy yer hissy-fit, little big man

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) I am observing you two are playing :)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Lol, least you make up for humour, where you obviously lack in poetic talent. Obsession? No, I'm just putting you in your place. Underneath my feet, just like the s**t on my shoe. You chose to say that my talent needs working on, hence the fact I am making a mockery of all of your pathetic poetry attempts. Seriously , it's like comparing eminem to ja rule, you do not and will not, ever have s**t on my level of talent. Bless ya little cotton socks. Low self esteem? Why would I have that, being that I write so well, unlike you. I am not pestering you, I'm just reminding you that I am the better poet, end of. If you feel different, let's battle with poetic words, darling. I couldn't care less what you think, because you sir, are a full blown nob! Step or shut the f**k up, you mug!

[gombeggar]

again, u sad child...u just keep showing off yer insecurities as the flag of yer shortcomings...again continue 2 express to ALL how insecure and effete u so r makng yerself out 2 be...and obviously u mut care boutall this quite a bit or u wouldn't continue to keep making a pubic fool of yerself, and only yerself alone cuz as i've made point 2 u and yer shallow ego, YOU r the one haing a hissy fit, not me...but as i said 2 u if u enjoy paradin around foolishly keep it up fo all 2 see

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Yawn. Your words are boring me, seriously. You have two choices, don't you. You either hush your little gums or I pen offensive poetry about you. Your decision, you talented b*****d, you lol

[gombeggar]

umm...u suddenly act as if i have 2 pay attenion 2 yer thin sad threats...umm, yer foolish AND wrong

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

No, you don't have to pay attention, what with your ADD and all that jazz. I'm just telling you be very careful, when it comes to this art form. It's not a threat mate, it's a inevitable promise. I will absolutely rip you a new arse hole :)

[gombeggar]

hmm...u child are really teething bad...AND SHOWING YOUR CHILISHNESS TO EVERYONE STILL...it's like u can't stop yerself...u r so sad

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Would eminem back down? No. Neither will I. If I have something to say, then it gets said. If it offends, not my problem. You're right, I can't stop. Maybe it's an addiction ;)

[gombeggar]

JUST KEEP SHOWING EVERYONE HOW MUCH YOU NEED TO GROW UP SO VERY BADDLY

[jkhatz]

The metaphor is perfect, allow me to say. I'm actually quite blown away by this, incredibly stunned, if you want the truth.

Zu etwas wie Spülwasser zu sein es ist traurig aber sehr profund.

Hervorragend!!

[gombeggar]

danke, fraulein ;)

[jkhatz]

Bitte schön!

[gombeggar]

wunderbar ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is quite a puzzle for me...the language looks intriguing... I may have to get my dear friend, Elisa Laura to translate this for me. lol :)
(she's fluent in a few languages)

[gombeggar]

all u need do is look down my list...it's posted in english 2

[Robbie~xoxo~]

oh, okay... Thank you. :)

[Ruth]

Interesting!
Of course, I have to be honest and say Google Translate was my friend this morning lol
But this is excellent metaphor! xox

[gombeggar]

thanks much...u did take notice i hope that this is 'i, dishwater' ...i just posted it in 3 times in 3 languages fer some odd reason...i was playing i guess

[Ruth]

Yes..well..playing is fun I guess...I did :) I liked the challenge this morning lol

[gombeggar]

;)