Capes -n- Chains

Capes and chains left over the chair

Take a good guess at what happened here

Take a guess…go on if you dare

Nothing’s wrong with things hung out with care

 

Near to the bed

There’s a line there that’s led

Full of clothes not so neat

Dropped down each bit to the feet

 

Ahh, what goes on in one’s bed

Best it stays there in stead

No peeking, no prying

Certainly no poking

Not by any strangers anyway

Perhaps come another day

Make sure to call first

Certainly no more unannounced inward bursts

That’s just not proper edict

Unless you’re an invited guest

 

No, no…no, no…no more

No, not any pictures on this floor

Now leave now, now do so please

Lest I get uptight and cause you to leave

Leave us in private just for a while

After all (and the girl’s will love this), I’ve just brought her down from the aisle

 

Why? What did you think with your dirty minds?

Reviews

[FrancescaX]

You are good.
You actually had me there.
Good write a really good one.

[gombeggar]

thanks...glad u like this

[FrancescaX]

You are actually one of the best writers i have come across.

[gombeggar]

u r gonna fill me with hubris if u keep this up

[gombeggar]

read Marie Anzalone's work on here

[FrancescaX]

alright but it doesnt change a thing ;D

[gombeggar]

;)

[FrancescaX]

;D

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the way it was written and it continues to pique my interest, good one, gombeggar ^-^

[gombeggar]

thank u very much :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Your welcomezzz

[Marie Anzalone]

LOL wandering all the hallways of your mind would take 3 lifetimes, my dear old friend. I would ask where you get your ideas, but don't think I really want to know. This was tongue-in-cheek, and a lot of fun. Lucky lucky bride. :-)

[gombeggar]

you'd most likely get lost in may wanderings just as i often do...but of course u of all people should know that ;)

[Marie Anzalone]

indeed :-)

[gombeggar]

Such an enjoyable read with a huge wink on the end... lol
Made my day! great work poet.

E.L.

[gombeggar]

well, thank u very much...glad to have made your day...if i can please then a job is done well ;)

:D smile

[Tabitha t]

lol this was very amusing and charming. great job

[gombeggar]

thanks much ;)

[lee von cleef]

Liked the review with tony the tiger Gerrrr! She said it all.pat your self on the back if you can reach it with those cuffs on.

[gombeggar]

thus speaketh the dirty minds ;)

[Larry Dyson]

really insightful! "Ahh, what goes on in one’s bed

Best it stays there in stead

No peeking, no prying

Certainly no poking

Not by any strangers anyway

Perhaps come another day

Make sure to call first

Certainly no more unannounced inward bursts

That’s just not proper edict

Unless you’re an invited guest"
who might that be?

[gombeggar]

ahh, well that would be telling, eclipse ;)

[de_maruf]

nice
enjoyable

[gombeggar]

thanks again

[Tom]

Very nice , brought a smile to my face. I enjoyed the mischievousness of it, the rhyme and language really brought this out in the poem.

[gombeggar]

much thanks

[Brit Kitty]

Told you I'd love it ;-)
Best give you my review for this one in private... ;-)
The damn box won't let me rate it above 100 grrr