Salt No. 1

Salt No. 1

A Poem by gombeggar

Salt

We must

Stay from

Salt

 

Salt

We must

Stay away from

Salt

 

Incredulous as that sounds

Incredulous as it seems

Cuz salt is all around

Even though our bodies have needs

Please keep this glut of salt

Far and away

Away from me

© 2012 gombeggar


Author's Note

gombeggar
iodine everymore? anyone? anyone?

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This makes me laugh since the doctors at Mayo Clinic told me to drastically INCREASE my salt intake so that I can keep the fluids in my bloodstream so that my blood can get to my heart and head fast enough. It's really helping in managing my POTS but sometimes I really wish I didn't have to salt nearly ALL my food.

Do you know how embarrassing it is to go to a restaurant and have everyones eyes on you, jaws dropped, whilst you pour a load of salt on your Fettuccine Alfredo?! LOL XD

I did enjoy the poem very much, though :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


gombeggar

11 Years Ago

glad i made u laugh, girl...and yes certain folk need a large amount of salt...and the truth is we A.. read more
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

Definitely :)
LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


Life is flavor ,salt adds to it, So sweat, sweat the passion that allows us our passions,lean , push away, build on a taste the flavor is better with salt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gombeggar

11 Years Ago

did it help?
lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

I guess so . a China man just told me "It could always be worse"
gombeggar

11 Years Ago

well that's a true-ism
i heard too much salt causes dropsy in humans. like the poem but a spice lover like me prefers taste. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


FrancescaX

12 Years Ago

thank you. people i know that like them. absolutely no taste...all of them( britsh accent)_
gombeggar

12 Years Ago

;)
gombeggar

12 Years Ago

i don't have a british accent at all
I like this, however, pass the salt!! :) I like the rhythm of this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

thanks much...but salt will be the death of ya, girl ;)
"never ever EVER!", say I!

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

never? hmm...
Mary

12 Years Ago

never give up the salt! Use it for chips and for snow removal, he he
prefer the sea. Interesting write

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

thanks much
I am a salt-o-holic ... Every time I get tested, I am low on sodium and K ..
I don't wan help .. just Salt Please ..

Jazz :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

it is no good fer u...no no no
J. J.  Nightingale

12 Years Ago

Yes it is ... you can't live without the right balance .. Perhaps You have hypertension ?
gombeggar

12 Years Ago

that would be telling, jasmine
HA! I like that. A poem from a cardiologist. That's great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

thanks ;)
this was nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


gombeggar

12 Years Ago

thanks much

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Added on August 4, 2012
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gombeggar
gombeggar

hazleton, PA



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