Consolation

Consolation

A Poem by Llysofar

Trauma,

undermining

flimsy trust,

I keel over.

 

Staring

into space

I am

suddenly aware

of all the rust

that brings down

bridges.

 

In the end,

everything

will go.

© 2008 Llysofar


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This is very meaningful, Goldlilocks, I liked it.
My favorite was:
"Staring
into space
I'm suddenly
aware

of all the rust
that brings down
bridges."
-October


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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