The Rock of Ages

The Rock of Ages

A Poem by Llysofar

In the blue mirror 
A great tree stands,
Incandescent,
Green,

But
Turned to
Stone.

Winds whoosh past,
Pleading, urging.
Clouds float over,
Brushing
Softly.

Something's missing -
In the bog,
The life-force
Lies and waits
For the
Hovering

day.
 

© 2008 Llysofar


Author's Note

Llysofar
I have changed this many times (last version contained the last line `Lofty leaves', but was not in the original). I'll probably never capture the original feeling behind this :)(:

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a lot left to be intpretation? nice images.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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