He

He came

He took

He did it

He won

 

What can I do now?

I am torn

I am all out of faith

I have no meaning

I have no use...

No worth...

No life...

 

Thank you for killing me

Softly with your words

Thank you for killing me

Roughly with you actions

Reviews

[(Loveless)]

I love this one its probley on of my favorite ones you have made so far ^^ I love the words you used an the ending is the best part "thank you for killing me softly with your words thank you for killing me roughly with you actions" I love it so much.

Keep up the poetry =) hehe im such a fan X3

[Dalebear]

Good Write

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Oh yes! I know these words and the emotions behind them! This was wonderfully put together. Very relatible!

Ash

[mamabear]

WOW! It is so sad but beautifully written. Congratulations Little Wolf Cub another masterpiece. Congratulations you are a wonderful poet.

Mamabear x