Phoenix and Dante

Hello, if you are reading this then it must mean that I have died or I have competed my mission or maybe even both, I have decided to write this so the memories are where I will be able to see them, and so people would know the true story about me and my family, well if I can find them.

 

So where should I start?

 

From where it all began would be good I think but so you guys know who I am, I will start at before the beginning when I was born on 31^st of October in the year 2666 maybe or in fact a better place to start might be when my parents met for the first time, ah yes I will start there but I’ll give you some history about this world first so you don’t lost and I will tell some information only few know of.

 

Testouri is the weirdest looking planet you could ever find. When it was first made, half of it looked so amazingly beautiful and the other half looked like a war a zone. The two different halves of the planet were called Diyu and Tianshi.

 

Diyu was were the demons ruled, they ruled with violence and torment, the main city there was the worse place to go, gambling, fights and everything you can think of was there, it was open 24/7, all the days of the year but hey the demons love it and I can easily scam them.

 

Tianshi was were the angels ruled, now they are nothing like the demons, the angels that live here are peaceful with each other and follow the rules the King and Queen had made, they lived in harmony with the wildlife, they looked after the trees, plants and all the animals, they lived in perfect love and perfect trust, an amazing place to relax and learn so many new things.

 

I love both places so much, which is very weird but I am weird or how others would say it, I’m different, not evil yet not good.

 

Anyway now as you should know or should have guessed by know there are demons and there are angels, which are at war. This war was fought for many years, to you humans it would be 10,000 years, but to us only 1,000 years. It all started was an ancient fight between two families that went out of control, everyday many lives are lost of both kinds, I was born near the middle of the fighting.

 

There was a prophecy about the two sides coming together as one, demons and angels living together peacefully. The tablet doesn’t say the complete prophecy because of the age of the tablet has wore away parts of it, all that the seers can see is that there will be a child that stops the fighting, and her mother would be angel named after an amazing bird, and her dad would be a... that was all they should see from it, so from then on only the main demon family knew what it said, every angel with a name that is a type of bird was killed at birth or when she was 18. Only one of them angels lived to the age of 20 and her name was Phoenix.

 

Phoenix a new angel with skin that was like the morning snow, her lips were like rose petals and her hair was a dark as the deepest parts of the abyss, she was slim and about 5 foot 7 but at this point in time she was running away from the most powerful demon the world has ever seen, his name made people shake in fear, most were scared to say it but the ones that did was trusted, plain stupid or any woman he was getting friendly with, it was Dante. With his long blonde hair, deep sea blue eyes that can make any woman weak and even a few guys, and his muscles that made him so strong and so very sexy (to most people, if I guy like that tried it with me I would kick him in the nuts). He had the six pact and tattoos, he would never wear a shirt, just black jeans, black trainers and a black hat and a necklace his mother gave him when he was a baby.

 

He was gaining fast as he could run like the wind, Phoenix thought if she ran down a dark alley he wouldn’t find her, but she was wrong, he cornered her, she had nowhere to run. While walking back she slipped on some water on the floor, as she fell to the cold hard floor she backed into the corner ‘please don’t hurt me, I beg of you please don’t’. Dante made a fire ball in his hand he put more power in it, the flame got bigger, she could now she his face because of the light, he looked at her, he looked deep in her eyes. Then boom the fire ball was thrown...

Reviews

[mamabear]

WOW! This is amazing. I love your ideas and the characters come to life on the page. I can imagine being there! You must have inherited your amazing talent from your Mother I bet she can write too!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations I look forward to reading more of this amazing story. You are totally awesome!!!!!

keep it up

Mamabear xx

[Dalebear]

Wow!!!! sis that was a good read a couldn't stop reading, your ideas and characters had me hooked in the book. You're little brother so proud of you.

Well done Faboulous
Love Dalebear