Me

It was how i was feeling when i wrote it, it could be triggery but most of my poetry can be. its just a small poem but i hope you like it.

My arms has cuts
My life has no truth
My head hangs low
My emotions are dark

My smile is fake
My existence, a lie
My eyes have tears
My hand has a knife

My voice has two words
My words are ‘good bye’

Reviews

[Nyida Strong]

I know you, so I don't have to say something trivial like "don't do it". The power in this is like a lightning bolt to the brain. Many of us out here have had these moments, myself included. Writing is therapy and this is truth. Very well done. Keep up the great writing.

N. Strong

[mamabear]

Such powerful words, I am glad that you aren't feeling like that anymore. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future, keep it up!

mamabear xxxxxxx

[trapperhoney]

i have felt this way. very powerful.

[Dalebear]

I feel your emotion and the pain
well done