I Am

Like a raven soaring high

Like cheetah running fast

I am

Like tiger cub playing

Like a loins roar

I am

Like a gun firing

Like a bird singing

I am

Like a tree losing it leaves

Like a light turning on

I am

What i am

I will not change

For anyone

And no-one can make me change

Reviews

[Dalebear]

I love your imagination.....where it takes you nope no one can well done

[Matthew Young]

love the imagery you conjure up through your metaphors. this is an excellent write that packs a powerful punch. thanks for sharing it on here :-)

[mamabear]

Dont change for anyone baby girl, You are soooooooooooooooooo perfect just the way you are. I love you just the way you are.

mamabear xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[trapperhoney]

this reminds me a lot of my poem you commented on. interesting....

[paul]

you're really a great writer

[Nyida Strong]

GOOD GIRL!!! Never change because some wants you to for them, but because you are the one that sees the need to do so.

N. Strong