I Ended It

It is like I am stuck in time,
Like I am on puppet strings
Can’t feel heat of the sun,
Nor the love from the moon,
Can’t hear the birds sing,
Just a beep beep beep beep,
As I start to feel,
I can feel the pain,
That is it,
Barely able move my arms,
Knowing what I have done,
I start to think why,
Life is amazing,
Why did I want to end it,
No more bad,
Yet no more good,
Then it is the end,
All black it went,
The last thing I hear is a continual beep,
That was it no more,
That was the end of me.

Reviews

[mamabear]

This is so sad, Congratulations. keep the good work up. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Mamabear xxxxxxx

[Dalebear]

I like the way you have used the beep and the bad and the good

Keep writing
Love Dalebear