A Sort of Undine Quality

Saccharine Sea Maiden shell.

Nuggety pearl

Sinking in the tidal wreath.

Watching where the beach

Rests up it.

And finds the bay of glee

Bequeathed.  

Reviews

[Sioranth Smith]

Ok, you can shoot me if you want but this actually make me think of when I was a little kid I'd dump a metric ton of sugar on my Rice Krispies cereal. The milk became the tidal wreath and the sugar was the first two lines. The cereal was standing in for the beach and the bay of glee was that super sugary milk sludge at the bottom of the bowl. :)

[Sputter Outlaw]

No i like this interpretation very much, it makes more sense

[Sioranth Smith]

I'm glad you didn't find my quirky interpretation offensive. :) I certainly didn't mean it that way. lol

[Sputter Outlaw]

Not at all :)

[love, lorey]

I really rather like this. Quite a bit.

Must be the fairy tale loving little girl in me. :)

Beautiful wording, and rhythm.

-L