Elevate the Mind, Body, and Soul

You speak overwhelmingly beautiful words to me

  that send me into depths on dehydration.

Quench my thirst,

   you're the only antidote.

I want to dissect your every phrase,

    you speak life to me.

I constantly hear your voice playing in my mind

   which leaves me smiling for hours on end.

Elevate my esteem.

 

 

Let's communicate through touch,

    Haptic communication.

Touch me gently to send waves of vibrations through my persons,

   I'll never tell you to stop.

Allow yourself to get lost in my embrace,

    let's transcend.

Touch me as if we were running out of oxygen,

   and I'm the last breathe you'll ever take.

Elevate my libido.

 

 

You related my aura to electricity,

   which sent bolts down my spine.

I want to envelope you in positive energy,

   and suffocate you with my love.

Witness our souls intertwine like the laces of my shoe,

  while you whisper in my ear "Girl, I need you."

This is only the prelude for what's to begin,

   what's on the the other side of the door?

Continue to pull back the layers.

Elevate the intensity. 

Reviews

[Jibey]

Beautifully constructed as usual, the form of the verses holding together the emotional tension within. You cleverly re-create intensity of desire, the need for touch that communicates transcendent feelings, arousing your libido, creating the electricity and connection that sets the scene for a full surrender, or a longed-for tango... 'Pulling back the layers' hints at the strip to nakedness that allows each perfect access to the other, the prelude to urgent intimacies, the mounting and fusing that makes for a heavenly rhapsody. How wonderful to be overwhelmed by body and soul.

[Zami Amma]

Yes, yes, and yes! I appreciate you acknowledging my structure choice. Elevating the mind, whispering those beautiful words over me, holding me, loving me.. This elevates my esteem. Elevating the body.. this haptic communication, taking my breath away..sighing in satisfaction.This elevates my libido. Elevating my soul, my vibrations. Our energies flowing in sync on the same wavelength. Soul's soaring to climax..elevating the intensity. Most certainly a heavenly rhapsody.. I'm so grateful for your positive words of affirmation, thank you for understanding! :)

[GKN]

Your word play is exquisite. The sound and rhythm as well flow of ideas create vivid emotions that really touch the soul. Beautiful.

[Zami Amma]

Thank you so much for your beautiful words, they motivate me to keep doing what I'm doing. You're so appreciated! :)

[alan peter kelly]

This write I hear as performance piece... I could literally hear your voice bursting through the style and timing oh I see you body language this to captivated audience and I ain't talking no correctional facility... these people be all glued to seats all eyes on the beautiful young black woman with so articulate a fire in her eyes and individual linguistics... you know you got it...I am pleased to read such sensuality delivered with a confidence I believe well belongs to you....I see skill...I see you going to where you want to be...this was sexy...and thank you for the revelation I found in you...