My Heart

My poetic lover,
If I had a flower for every time I thought of you I could walk through a garden for eternity.
My mesmerizing lover,
I'm captivated by your beauty,
you make my heart skip a beat.
My angelic lover.
lips gentle as a dove,
kiss me once more.
Let me inhale your exhale..
It was the closest thing to heaven because you were there.
My lips are aching..
My radiant lover,
no one shines as bright as you do
you have the key to my heart,
please hold it dear.

My X-rated lover.
beg me not to stop,
tell me you want more.
whisper my name..
witness my back arch and my muscles tighten.
My hypnotizing lover,
bewitched by your mind, body and soul.
I'm in awe of your grace and empathy.
Don't ever stop loving me.
My adequate lover,
no one has ever made me feel the way that you do.
Touch me when I ask..when i'm afraid to ask.
Touch me with you lips, your hands, your soul, your presence.
I absolutely love you.

Reviews

[Jibey]

This poem breaths romantic passion.. I love the repeated phrase and the different epithets for the loved one... A woman capable of expressing such thoughts is a woman with a rich, deep soul... her breath is like the sweet fragrance of honeysuckle, her lips the silky softness of petals...

[Zami Amma]

Your similes and metaphors are ideal, you see me. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Your heart seems so endlessly embracing, so beautifully lifting, so passionate as if made of pure fire. I read your words, your soul, and with each line there is another delicate yet strong revelation of who you are as you make a world of life for your lover. In this kind of living, you and your lover will forget the rest of the world so you can burn. xo

[Zami Amma]

You speak life to me and inspire me to always write beautiful words. I love that you enjoy reading the pages of my souls diary, I appreciate you. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

So thankful you share your soul with us, and keep us lifted into your sacred fires. :)