Nataraj

Shiva is a brilliant lover.

Knowing exactly what I'd need,
he came to me as Nataraj.

 

All those hands did as they pleased.

And leaning over me
his eyes glimmered with delight,
as I panted in his ear,

and exploded into the vastness
of his arms.

Reviews

[BL]

Powerful erotic and with great measure of pace

[Roland]

lucky Shiva! is any of you left for us who might not be so brilliant, or are you now "spoiled"? I like the simplicity of the text but the depth the content portrays. Seething ... so nice.

[Eric Wagner]

so sensual, I can feel those hands as they caress the body.

[Jibey]

Simple and affecting, the surrender to the god is a heavenly treat

[Everett DeValle]

Your poem is brilliant...a splendid read.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Wow-- you have a super style in displaying your words-- They entertain thanks for sharing this poem Frank :)