You're the one

First 4 lines from 9-20-10 the rest is a collaboration with my roommate Jeremy (he's Canadian) from 1-29-13. Might be adding more. This is a song, in case you couldn't tell.

Unbreakable walls break

Unchangeable hearts change

Un-clearable minds clear

At the sound of your great name

 

Because you’re the one

Who can change my heart

Yeah you’re the one

In my life you took part

Yeah you’re the one

You’ve been doing it from the start

Yeah you

 

Holy Lord

Righteous king

Eternal Father

Giver of life

Three in one

Father Spirit Son

 

Because you’re the one

Who can change my heart

Yeah you’re the one

In my life you took part

Yeah you’re the one

You’ve been doing it from the start

Yeah you

 

Sculpted and shaped

Molded too

In his son

He made us anew

Took away our sin

There upon the cross

Jesus died

For all us

 

Because you’re the one

Who can change my heart

Yeah you’re the one

In my life you took part

Yeah you’re the one

You’ve been doing it from the start

Yeah you

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

Ooooo well done Jeremia! Has a kind of Falling Up kind of feel to it xD you should listen to them btw if you don't know who I'm referring too. I have a feeling you'll like em ^_~

[Jeremia]

*youtubing*

[Jeremia]

They sound so familiar, but I don't know where from. Unless they remind me that much of TFK. No no, I definitely heard this before. Idk where from tho. Must have been the radio.

[Serenity Faith]

Possibly...I came across them years ago, I don't remember how lol. But no one else seemed to have ever heard of em xD they're pretty awesome right?

[Jeremia]

Yes, I like the song I just listened to. But I know I've heard it before. Just cant remember for sure where that was.

[Serenity Faith]

Symmetry is probably my fav by them xD

[Jeremia]

I'll look up that one next.

[Em]

This is very well done.

[Jeremia]

Thanks Em. :)

[Em]

You're very welcome:)

[Jeremia]

Were you able to catch the tune? It's suppose to be a song.

[Em]

Yes, I noticed actually. Very good.

[Jeremia]

Sweet. Glad to hear.

[Michael X]

spirited outlook to ponder in light of devotion, the form captivates the words to give the entire piece a melodic sense of understanding. you've done well here!

[Jeremia]

Thank you very much. This piece is one I'm pretty happy with, so I'm glad you think I've done well.