Repaired

Working title.

My life of broken glass.
The shattered remains.
Cutting into the skin of those around me.
You came like fireworks.
Bursting brightly into my starless sky.
Filling the cracks of my heart with your words.
Pulling out all the pain.
Glueing my life back together.
Piece by piece.
Till my heart could beat on its own.
Now.
I'm giving it to you.

Author's Note

A poem I wrote a while ago. Not sure about title. Please comment!

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

Wow, i love this! great use of similies and this was very poetic!

[Dante Yurei]

It was a little short, but I loved the comparisons.

[Sexy P3nguin]

The title is good. It fits the poem well. The old story of some one being heartbroken has been done a million times BUT, you do it like i have never seen. Comparing a broken heart to a broken mirror was an ingenious idea. Great write.