Butterfly

Your beautiful.

I can only stare,
In amazment.

I move slowly,
I don't want to scare you away.

I am quiet,
Silenced by your beauty.

I listen to the gentle song,
You sing with your heart beat..

Dawn is coming,
your breathing is slow.

Suns peaks overs the rolling hills,
Its rays touching your softness.

And you fly,
With soft blue wings.

Neverto be seen again,
Leaving magic in your path.

Author's Note

My first bit of writing in about a year.

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

Hey, I thought this was really pretty, I really liked this poem :)
Just one thing.
Your beautiful.
*You're beautiful.
:p But again, really good, your profile says you're more of a reader and that you wrote some poems but don't think they're that good, I think you're a good writer :)

[Sarah Marie]

very nice-short, but it flows easily

[Huggy Bear]

Great write:)

[(:]

Butterflies are beautiful and I love watching them. This is great poem decribing them. (:

[Desert Dreamer]

Butterflies are wonderful. Great poem. I spend a lot of time creating a garden to attract butterflies. :)

[qaralynn]

oehh nice poem..

[Jessica Mai]

This is beautiful. I can definitely relate. Butterflies are spell binding

[Daydreamer54]

wow very poetic. it was very nice. :)

[ClosingAccount]

Sweet! unique

[Sexy P3nguin]

'I listen to the gentle song,
You sing with your heart beat..'
Awesome line right there. The whole poem was awesome but for some reason those two lines worked out for me. The flow was nice and the description is outstanding, Great write you have here