Singing In The Shower

Singing In The Shower

A Poem by Blue_Jazberry
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I tried to write a haiku, and yes, I would start crying in the shower if I wasn't singing.

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Yeah, I shower sing
Not just to belt the songs out
But so I don't cry

© 2022 Blue_Jazberry


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Blue_Jazberry
This is the first time i've written a haiku, whatcha think?

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Very moving. Crying in the shower is a very real thing. So I guess, singing is a way of averting. Good haiku!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Blue_Jazberry

2 Years Ago

Thank you! may you have success on your writing journey.
Red Brick Keshner

2 Years Ago

You too! Glad to be on that journey 'together' (somehow)... cheers!
Almost but I think Haiku has 5 / 7 / 5 and your has 4 / 7 / 5 (I'm not native English person so not sure but)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Blue_Jazberry

2 Years Ago

Oh crap, I even checked three times-
thank you for pointing that out.

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Added on April 10, 2022
Last Updated on April 10, 2022
Tags: vent, shower, singing, singing in the shower, shower singing, haiku, poetry

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Blue_Jazberry
Blue_Jazberry

Tecumseh, MI



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