realized

I just did it.
Did it again, after a long time.
I just rammed an antique blade in my ankle,
when it touched the bone I realized...

they were right!

I'm dead.

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Unusual....short...
A realization ?
A vision?
A want?

Unsure
Scott

[Laminators Dubai]

friend, i can't word my realization. no one get through this at all. i don't have the right to show the world...

[Scott Metro]

:)

Scott....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay this one leaves me speechless.I often wonder why we find it necessary to hurt ourself to feel alive.Well penned full of feeling :)

[Laminators Dubai]

i think that this is the best way to treat yourself when no one cares. your dead anyway. nobody care.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Somebody always cares my friend even if they are too dumb to let you know .

[Laminators Dubai]

maybe they are way smart...they love to hide others soul in insanity. we are dumb that we think that someone always care. we don't have the right.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well said but you are not dumb .By reading your poems i see that you are very wise .Maybe the only way they make themselves feel better is by making you feel sad so that makes them very cruel:(

[Laminators Dubai]

its life, cruel but have to live it for other. i did tried to create myself but inner self is dying.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well let's hope this new year will be better:)

[Laminators Dubai]

................hope :)