she's all right

Perceive herself? Identify?
just another wet soul, now dried
nobody's here to feel the pain
she need to cry some more, with saline

she fall outside of the boundaries
underlying spectrum of unknown name
she failed to feel, she realize
lived the best lies, living but disguised

pain is the best way to keep herself afflicted
it’s a lot better than that screaming voice inside
just a little blood, she's 'all right''
coarse her mind behave, she can't decide
 
love to hate herself,
 she loved everyone who ever criticized
they keep her 'in control'', down through the core
trick herself to stay occupied.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

well writen poem , dark message behind the line. possesive and force eliminate the human willingness

[Laminators Dubai]

totally.
I actually feel like new me after reading my writings. This one always make me think again.
Thanks for reading me. have fun and be blessed.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful poem. You create a bad place where we accept less and it is okay. The strong statements create sad visions and the emotion of little hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Painful yet beautiful write glitch. Well done.

[Laminators Dubai]

I do feel that's one of my best too. thank you so much ron :)

[ron]

You are most welcome glitch :)

[Bimash Budha]

Its beautiful yet creatively written. Well done there!

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

I can feel the pain Glitch....Very well crafted lines....

[00000000000000000000000..]

You wrote with a lot of depth here Glitch :) Depth is within I see all that dear friend:)

[PoetryPenPal]

I loved this poem friend! :-)

[KAin]

Nice work, glitch - this strikes close to home. The final stanza certainly nails it. Nicely done.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Ahhh, think about the multitude who can relate to this! Universal theme. Very well-written, Glitch! :)