the cemetery

 

Why everything is wrong?

 There is a scream,

But it used to be a song.

A nightmare or a dream?

I don't understand, what is it?

 

You can imagine,

A garden of flowers,

Or a playground made of cloud.

But the real question is,

Why there's a butterfly in the cemetery?

Or will she ever find her rose?

 

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

a provoking poem, well written, Why there's a butterfly in the cemetery? Or will she ever find her rose?

that a question that could lead into many philosophy thought. excelent

thanks for share :)

[Laminators Dubai]

it does lead to many other thoughts. it does to me. I'm still working on the other part of this one.

[Edward Lancheister]

okay look forward for more of your written

[Laminators Dubai]

I don't know about the future. I'm losing my thinking network :(

[Edward Lancheister]

Lol as long it doesnt contain inbalance signal

[Laminators Dubai]

its already happening! !!

[PoetryPenPal]

This poem is beautiful. I love the questions the person is asking to herself. I especially loved the line,
"There is a scream, that used to be a song." wonderful work!

[Banana split !]

you gave me very clear pictures in my mind and really touched me. I love it :)

[Laminators Dubai]

thank you so very much!

[Solilokiss]

A beautiful write that reminds me of my late grandmother. Whenever A white butterfly passes me, she pops into mind, and ironically her name is Rose! So beautifully has this touched me that I will fave to read and read again. Many thanks for sharing it.

[Laminators Dubai]

I'm glad that i had an impression. Thank you X1000000000^^

[Solilokiss]

Most welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Cemeteries always invoke creepy things but also they teach us to appreciate this life and the after one...Bravo.............

[Laminators Dubai]

yes...and they teach us to value and enjoy this life.
thank you sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true...You are welcome...Pen on...:)................

[Laminators Dubai]

wowwowowow.....................someone who's heart does not support her, well she must've know that what is life :/

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a lovely and sad piece my dear glitch.I hope she finds her rose:)

[Laminators Dubai]

thank you vidya. i can only hope now because that butterfly can't fly anymore.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and I am sorry about the butterfly:)Still smile my friend:)

[Laminators Dubai]

Its hard to smile for myself my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am sorry my friend but things will get better I promise(:

[Laminators Dubai]

......................I hope so...................

[Vidya Bacchus]

.............................:)

[magenta24uk]

Lovely yet sad. I feel if she finds her rose hold it tight and don't worry about the thorns. xx

[Laminators Dubai]

Well she's still searching...
Thank YOU so much !

[N!LoC]

i feel like this is something that i would have written ... my kinda style

[Laminators Dubai]

this is a compliment for me....haha^^..thanks!

[KAin]

Beautifully put!
I loved the rhyme scheme, and the rhythm the stanzas generated. Nice work, glitch!

[Laminators Dubai]

come on!
thanks!^^ you've made me smile...