Jagger!

nonsense...as usual...

I'm not princess nor a movie star,
I'm not a fairy with a fairy power,
there's only thirty minutes in my hour,
only count till seventeen, still don't hit the beat!

I'm original, like every rainbow,
my always crazy, like lightning bolt,
I'm not a moon, but sure I worth one.
I'm a Gemini, sure you had a clue.

I can taste the colors, looking at the pain,
due to my insanity, I feel that the Sun shine rain,
can't spell that silly song,
did heard it somewhere,
I dance without the music,

You always took my seat!

If save have wave, then let’s just die like a brave
showing my moves, I'm in the party with dead
they are way more lively than those who sleep on the bed.
At least I can breathe between them, don't just love me coz I have heat!

 

Reviews

[Ashley D'Costa]

No real words to describe this.Wonderful work

[wordman]

well i`m close to a gemini and i`m sure i dated one and i like jagger

[Noeldeeptz]

"I'm a Gemini, sure you had a clue" For some reason this is my best line of this piece, and the piece as a whole is delicious#smiles#

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

It isn't a nonsense....everything in this nature like the rainbow or the sunshine is a proof that you are real and a part of them....thats what gives hope to SOMEONE

[PoetryPenPal]

It may be nonsense to some, but it makes perfect sense to you so it is perfect. Thank you for this interesting poem, that obviously came from you.;-)

[Laminators Dubai]

REALLY!! THANKS PAL!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[PoetryPenPal]

YOU TO PAL!!!

[Rasi Rana]

I'm original, like every rainbow,
my always crazy, like lightning bolt,

due to my insanity, I feel that the Sun shine rain,

these lines I loved most) A poem describing U to the very extent)

[Laminators Dubai]

WELL, THANK YOU RASI! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[magenta24uk]

I love the 30 min in an hour line. I feel like that all the time. Very hard hitting but then you never pull back on your punches that is why I love to read your work. x

[Laminators Dubai]

WELL YES! ITS HARD. HAPPY NEW YEAR!! AND THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!

[Avinash]

I am Gemini as well. So I can see there are several rounds of Boxing going inside you. Your struggle and pain although claimed as "Non-sense" from your note makes a lot of sense to me. All I wish is that you come out victorious.

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU AVINASH, FOR THE REVIEW AND TAKING MY BACK TOO :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Very stimulating to the mind. Loved this read. xo Winter

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU WINTER :) HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :)

[Saddam]

A crazy poetry...love this...

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU *HAPPY!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[Laminators Dubai]

**** WISH :)

[Saddam]

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU MY FRIEND TOO.