A letter to The Evil

Hi there!

Mr. evil,

How are you?

And what about the hell?

 

I wish your well,

Because humans needs you,

It’s the heaven,

We curse upon.

 

So the thing is,

Could you just tell me,

Whats wrong with this humanity?

Where is the dignity?

Why Money is the priority?

 

Why this hate?

While we know what is love?

Why don’t we like to use our heart?

Why we love to hate others?

Like they are not the part of us.

 

Heart can't be rust,

Love can't be dust,

Hate always be burst,

Still the humans never trust.

 

I guess we just care about the history,

Wondering what was the mystery?

But for hate? For what? For sake?

That was just a piece of cake.

 

Im a big fan of yours,

Not because you are bad or maybe the worse,

Not because you give us what we worth,

Because of your obedience,

About your work and orders.

Wish I could do that,

You are doing a bad job with great efforts.

 

And we so  called smartest humans,

Known about everything,

Fall for you,

Actually you are doing nothing,

We are bad enough to help you.

 

Keep doing nothing,

Our stupidity is enough,

I guess,

Just take care of Hitler,

For me.

 

And what happened to my summer internship?

 

Your biggest fan

And crudely yours,

Glitch 

Author's Note

wish you guys enjoyed it.
just let me know if there is something wrong...
thanks for reading!^^

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem Glitch. I really enjoyed it

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks ricochet!

[Noeldeeptz]

This is quite deep with truths exposed. Wonderful one glitch

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks noel! XD

[Inda]

This is very creative, the innocent voice in this piece really works well, great job!

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks inda! ^^

[Vidushi Sharma]

"Im a big fan of yours,
Not because you are bad or maybe the worse,
Not because you give us what we worth,
Because of your obedience,
About your work and orders.
Wish I could do that,
You are doing a bad job with great efforts."
loved it in simple words!!

[Laminators Dubai]

Thanks vidushi!i!i!

[♪Barklight♪]

Love it Glitch and as sad as this is: its kinda true. We seem to obey the evil in us all too easily without him having to lift a finger for us to do so. Once again some powerful poetry

[Laminators Dubai]

Thanks barky !

[KAin]

This poem is so sweetly written it's hard to see the serious undertones to it. I like what you've done with it. A few grammatical errors here and there,

Line 28 - did you mean 'worse' or 'worst'?

Line 29 - "Not because you give us what we worth" should be
"Not because you give us what we're worth".

Other than that, though, I like the theme and how the tone of it contradicts each other, it's quite clever! Nice work Glitch! Keep writing!

[Laminators Dubai]

Hummmm.....
actually i said what i ment....
i write a bit cozy...i admit....but i change sequences and words...i have my own ways to thing to write to say...
its in Dna.....HahaXD
thanks for r and r and^^

[KAin]

I can respect that! In that case, don't stop doing what you do! :)

[Laminators Dubai]

Sure ! XD
Im never going back.
Thanks!
Bye! ^^

[The dark story]

Hate can't be rust
Love can't be dusst
Hate always be burst
Still the human never trust

I loved this stanza a lot.it is really thought provoking and full of wisdom. Yet I think it should be better with
"Hate always bursts". This is just my opinion.

As for the poem, I liked it a lot. The the whole style and theme and the touching message in it which is very much needed in the current scenario. Also, your portrayal of your thought is very much appreciatable. I love how you have added comic lines in it with quirpness.

Well penned. Thanks for sharing!!

[Laminators Dubai]

wow
thanks!
i will change this...sounds good to me.
Im so happy you liked it atiba^^

[The dark story]

You're most welcome. It is worth liking. XD
I should admit you are quite clever.:)

[Laminators Dubai]

Haha
Im am clever full of moxy !

[Coyote Poetry]

It does feel evil control all things. The sad part is. We never hear of the good people. The people who give time and money to the poor. The many great charities if this world trying to feed and aid the poor. The media tell us the bad news and about bad people only. They is kindness. Even if we must start with our self. I agree the Devil had gain a lot in the world of greed. Free-will can lead you to bad places. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
i know coyote ...you sounds like my brother.
Thing is...if bad is doing its job with great efforts...than why can't good...
I know good is good and bad is bad and will be...
everything is not good...but a good one can come from anywhere...
this is the plot.
thanks for r and r^^

[Jack...]

The problem between good and evil...everyone, the internet, the news stations, everywhere focus on the evil...no one even has an opportunity to see the good...but it is out there. Nicely done my friend, but I'd like to see a letter to Mr. Good.

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
i will write a letter to Mr goody too...
Thanks jack...

[ferousfinite]

lol great story! Very comical and bright with a bit of innocence still about.

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
thanks finite^^