i see

in my sweetest dream 

i see

a hell with you

in my nightmare

i see 

a heaven without you....

Author's Note

something is wrong....or maybe right....

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Talk about a study in contrasts...a "don't do it, I like it" sort of thing. Intriguing to say the least. Lydi**

[ron]

This is a sad poem glitch. It shows how unhappy you are with him.

[Laminators Dubai]

haha
now there is no him.....its just a wordplay thats all....
and i dont think its sad...
but thanks anyway....

[ron]

Switch Heaven and hell and it would read not so sad.

[Laminators Dubai]

actually....in love even its hell with the one..you feel like heaven.....but without the one a heaven will just like hell...so that my crazy wordplay....that the best i-can-do...

thank for everything^^

[ron]

Oh, that makes sense now glitch. You did very good with this one, I was just blind and did not see it. I am a small man sorry.

[Laminators Dubai]

no way...you are a big guy...for me a good guy.....
sometime it happens...its not your fault....i write a bit cozy....and mad...and dumb,..,..and lame....and blah blah blah...
but you understand me very well...at least you care....that enough for a maddie..
really thanks for everything..^^

[ron]

Your not dumb or lame glitch please never say that. Thank you for how you think of me.

[Laminators Dubai]

words not enough to tell what i think of you....
friends forever...
and i will never say that again....

[ron]

-Blushing- thank you glitch that is very sweet of you. I like you very much as a friend also.