on the paper...

feeling forgotten... you know me? hi! im glitch! nice to meet you!

i am word

no one use me

and maybe never...

i am a  line

everyone cross me

and will 'till forever...

i am a page

no one bookmark me

and maybe never...

i am a story

everyone skip me

and will 'till forever...

i am a book

no one every buy or borrow

and maybe never...

i am a thought

no one think about me

and maybe never...

  

and im thinking

how it feels like remembered?

i cant get a spark

and maybe never...

you know how?

or will i get it ever?

Author's Note

thanks...

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Insightful piece. I love the ambiguity and the tease. ;) Anyway, I'm just wondering if the disagreement of the subject and the verb in phrases like "no one use me", and "everyone cross me" is intentional? Other than that, I like this piece a lot. Good write, Glitch! :x

[Laminators Dubai]

as a line everyone cross me....get it?
sorry i write a little bit cozy....
thanks...and im glad you liked it^^

[Vidushi Sharma]

This is just wow! It just depicts all categories that can portray a soul as lonely!
"how it feels like remembered?
i cant get a spark
and maybe never..."
Good work!!

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU !
soo sooo much!
glitch

[Akshay Rawal]

Glitch..........I will never forget you even if my head's smashed with a hammer.This clearly depicts loneliness and isolation,,,,Well, good .We all are ignored and forgotten sometimes but still there are some who remember us however good or evil we are....Thanks for the share

[Laminators Dubai]

OMG!
WHAT IN THE WORLD?
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH AKSHAY.......HAHA...
I GUESS YOUR GONNA REMEMBER ME FOR MY CRAZINESS........
THANKS AGAIN FOR EVERYTHING!^^
LOVE YA
GLITCH

[Derek Smith]

this was written well, decent poem just not my style

[Laminators Dubai]

welll.....i guess i should try your style too....
thanks for everything!^^
glitch

[Derek Smith]

Lol never change styles. Attempting is one thing though. But your style is your own and that's what makes it unique.

[Laminators Dubai]

no...actually im still finding my style....so i guess trying is great!
but im glad that you think its unique...
thank for everything!
glitch

[Derek Smith]

Of course. :)

[ANTO]

I never heard of you!! Im kidding of course. Great word-smithing Glitch
X

[Laminators Dubai]

HEY!............HA HA
thanks anto...glad you liked it
XXX
glitch

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Laminators Dubai]

wow excellent!
glad you liked it...
thanks for everything!^^

[SyberRose]

Very creative piece as always...loved it ...Rose:)

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha
thank you! ^^
glitch

[Dreamer]

Good poem Glitch! very creative.. well done (:

[Laminators Dubai]

THANKS dreamer...glad you liked it...^^

[Dreamer]

You're welcome!

[MikeV]

I loved this Glitch! :)
And i will NEVER EVER forget this beautiful piece :)

[Laminators Dubai]

wow THANKS!^^
LOVE YA!

[Jack...]

Definitely different and creative my friend. Nicely penned or maybe never...

[Laminators Dubai]

maybe never?
well thanks anyway^^
glad you find it different...

[Jack...]

It was a compliment...just playing off of your poem. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

ohh.................ok^^