on the paper...

feeling forgotten... you know me? hi! im glitch! nice to meet you!

i am word

no one use me

and maybe never...

i am a  line

everyone cross me

and will 'till forever...

i am a page

no one bookmark me

and maybe never...

i am a story

everyone skip me

and will 'till forever...

i am a book

no one every buy or borrow

and maybe never...

i am a thought

no one think about me

and maybe never...

  

and im thinking

how it feels like remembered?

i cant get a spark

and maybe never...

you know how?

or will i get it ever?

Author's Note

thanks...

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Insightful piece. I love the ambiguity and the tease. ;) Anyway, I'm just wondering if the disagreement of the subject and the verb in phrases like "no one use me", and "everyone cross me" is intentional? Other than that, I like this piece a lot. Good write, Glitch! :x

[Laminators Dubai]

as a line everyone cross me....get it?
sorry i write a little bit cozy....
thanks...and im glad you liked it^^

[Ally Monique]

I love all the questions and doubts raised in this piece, its a very interesting concept!!! Excellent write thank you for sharing :)

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
its Preety close to my heart too.
Thanks! ^^

[annie lee]

These are things we all think of -- especially here. It seems some of us are only here to review others' work. You touch the hearts of all who wish to give of themselves.

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
i can feel that too.
Thanks^^

[Jason White]

As I read this, it seemed disjointed to the point of distraction (and this might be a difference in cultures since I'm from the US)... yet the imagery and ideas contained in it were enticing and poignant. As I read it, I started making mental edits which I jotted down on the off chance any of them are helpful.

I am a word;
no one uses me,
and maybe will never...

I am a line;
everyone crosses me,
and will 'til forever...

I am a page;
bookmarked by no one
and maybe will never...

I am a story;
skipped over by everyone
and will 'til forever...

I am a book;
unbought and unborrowed
and maybe will never...

I am a thought;
no one thinks about me
and maybe will never...

And I'm thinking;
how does it feel...
to be remembered?

I can't get a spark
and maybe will never...

You know how?
Will I get it ever?

[Laminators Dubai]

That great i will edit it later.
thing is i post from phone...
Thank you so much for this. I will try not to do this mistake again.
Thanks again by my heart^^

[Jason White]

Your welcome. Just keep in mind these are only suggestions, to be accepted or discard as you see fit... And thank you for sharing the poem. =)

[Laminators Dubai]

But my opinion that's a big help...if something makes you right ....it can't be bad....thank you so much...you can help me with others too... Its fine by me....
Thank you so much ^^
For you help
Im glad have your reviews...:-D

[rutherford]

Very clever conceptual theme. Quite enjoyed the idea of a thought being out there waiting to be thought of. Well constructed. Well done.

[Laminators Dubai]

im glad you liked it that much....usually you dont....so im happy....
thank you so much.

[rutherford]

Glitch, I hope i have not given you that impression. You have very creative ideas and i enjoy your writing.

[Laminators Dubai]

Look i never say what i feel but i was happy so i said it....i understand now...
At least we are cool now.
Most people treat me like a fugitive ...never say what they feel....crazy world ..
Thanks for everything and sorry if i did something wrong.
Love ya^^

[kublakhan27]

It was so easy for me to relate to this...I know just how it feels to have these thoughts...it feels like something I could have written...great work :)

[Laminators Dubai]

i wont say that im glad...that you are related to this...i know how it feels.....
thank you soo much^^

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome^^

[Eddie Phillips]

There is a simplistic genius to this poem. Great job

[Laminators Dubai]

OMG
Thanks eddie.....glad you liked it that much.

[Ankita]

Casual touch yet such intense and important lines that one just cannot afford to miss even a single one of them. I think that's how I describe your poems. Simple and very nicely written which totally reflects the mood you've tried to create....the loneliness reflects. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

oh thank you sooo much.......sure im gonna write.....
im glad..^^

[Ankita]

Such a pleasure! :)

[Vani Jalagar]

very simple and cute :)
i am a story
everyone skip me
and will 'till forever...
cool!!!!

[Laminators Dubai]

sure vani, people skip me even im much fun then i sound......
thank u so much!

[♪Barklight♪]

A lonley, gripping poem. Great use of words

[Laminators Dubai]

glad you liked my wordplay....thank you so much for the review!