i am the sand...

Im the sand
in the hourglass
im going down
to you the time
I just let you know
Its not me
who lose
its you
you fool
im still here
with the great very me
and you........

Author's Note

You know what i mean...

Reviews

[Vidushi Sharma]

You have some very deep thoughts!! :D

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah...or maybe i dont know what to think...ha ha ha
thanks for reading! ^^

[Vidushi Sharma]

That is usually when best come out...i usually write narrative poems, but when i start i just start without any theme..but gradually it turns into a narration

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah...i like dark and funny...but i hate sad ones...
We all have something....

[Izabe143]

I like it this is very interesting and very unique

[Laminators Dubai]

Thanks........
Glad you liled it....i was feeling low...then i thought...be the sand....go down for good...

[Izabe143]

Well I always love your writing! And I'm extra happy today

[Laminators Dubai]

Well...now im too happy ....glad to hear from you...:-D