MANAGED

MANAGED

A Poem by Laminators Dubai

eyes to see
and human to be
trees for us
but we just discussed 
thats all
we are perfectly MANAGED
and we are the Best
then why do you fail?
why do you cry?
why is your skin is pale?
you think its the End of this tale?
no!
it cant be!
because to end it
at least we have to start.

© 2013 Laminators Dubai


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Laminators Dubai
THANKS FOR READING....

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'Imperfectly Managed - Part 2'

"Our eyes to see
A human to be
The trees are for us

but we just discussed
all perfectly managed
If we are the best

then why do you fail
why do you cry
why are you pale

you think its the End of this tale
no it can not be
because it must start."

The Age of Man is merely the ability to take what is available and make it better. Not that I am better than you or that I am a man, but in this day and age, take hold of what's in front of you! When you write - be the clay!

When I see a piece of writing that speaks to me, but looks like a starving child, I feel compelled to foster it and revive it and embellish it. There are tools for writing, many at best. To learn is to activate and implement. Put your mind into gear and use the tools available to you. Create every piece of writing a final draft with basic format and structure ruling.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

So sorry friend u_u
i didn't mean to disappoint you with my immaturity...i know immaturity not.. read more
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

I will try to do best next time...and get my hands out of such unmanageable write.
Nirego

10 Years Ago

If you return, Glitch, to clear the air, I think ferousfinite was referring to the "broken English",.. read more



Reviews

Glitch, you are a born rapper.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. You really outpoured something here. Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


'Imperfectly Managed - Part 2'

"Our eyes to see
A human to be
The trees are for us

but we just discussed
all perfectly managed
If we are the best

then why do you fail
why do you cry
why are you pale

you think its the End of this tale
no it can not be
because it must start."

The Age of Man is merely the ability to take what is available and make it better. Not that I am better than you or that I am a man, but in this day and age, take hold of what's in front of you! When you write - be the clay!

When I see a piece of writing that speaks to me, but looks like a starving child, I feel compelled to foster it and revive it and embellish it. There are tools for writing, many at best. To learn is to activate and implement. Put your mind into gear and use the tools available to you. Create every piece of writing a final draft with basic format and structure ruling.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

So sorry friend u_u
i didn't mean to disappoint you with my immaturity...i know immaturity not.. read more
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

I will try to do best next time...and get my hands out of such unmanageable write.
Nirego

10 Years Ago

If you return, Glitch, to clear the air, I think ferousfinite was referring to the "broken English",.. read more
Sounds like you are mad at someone lol .. sorry

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

yeah
what ever is happening in the world...its just too stupid!
if this is a man age tha.. read more
Makes me glad I know who Monsanto is ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

hummmmm.............
thanks anyway^^
As other reviews says so will i "Loved the ending very much."

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

don't read what they say
tell me what you feel...

thanks glitch
Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

feeled the same even more pleased reading it ....
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

wow
that's cool. more than i though! XDXD
Creative and thought provoking at the end. Great poem. -Eddie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

May Im just a glitch or fugitive but sure Im creative and all....
My people say that i am pro.. read more
love love love the ending! It made the piece that much more powerful

"we are perfectly MANAGED
and we are the Best
then why do you fail?
why do you cry?
why is your skin is pale?
you think its the End of this tale?
no!
it cant be!
because to end it
at least we have to start."

you couldnt have said it better, I really enjoyed reading this one, thanks for sharing!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Brilliant and sweet! Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

Thanks inda...Im happy you liked it^^
Very cleverly done my friend. Indeed, to finish one must first start.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

yeah
thats what makes me keep calm and study first...for not to be last in the exams...lolread more

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Laminators Dubai

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