MANAGED

eyes to see

and human to be

trees for us

but we just discussed 

thats all

we are perfectly MANAGED

and we are the Best

then why do you fail?

why do you cry?

why is your skin is pale?

you think its the End of this tale?

no!

it cant be!

because to end it

at least we have to start.

Author's Note

THANKS FOR READING....

Reviews

[ferousfinite]

'Imperfectly Managed - Part 2'

"Our eyes to see
A human to be
The trees are for us

but we just discussed
all perfectly managed
If we are the best

then why do you fail
why do you cry
why are you pale

you think its the End of this tale
no it can not be
because it must start."

The Age of Man is merely the ability to take what is available and make it better. Not that I am better than you or that I am a man, but in this day and age, take hold of what's in front of you! When you write - be the clay!

When I see a piece of writing that speaks to me, but looks like a starving child, I feel compelled to foster it and revive it and embellish it. There are tools for writing, many at best. To learn is to activate and implement. Put your mind into gear and use the tools available to you. Create every piece of writing a final draft with basic format and structure ruling.

[Laminators Dubai]

So sorry friend u_u
i didn't mean to disappoint you with my immaturity...i know immaturity not the right person for this k
job...
Thanks for helping me out...and clear the wind...

[Laminators Dubai]

I will try to do best next time...and get my hands out of such unmanageable write.

[Nirego]

If you return, Glitch, to clear the air, I think ferousfinite was referring to the "broken English", which can affect flow, meaning, and enjoyment. It's not a problem, this is a journey after all is said and done and we are all here to learn from and experience each other.

[Astro]

Glitch, you are a born rapper.

[hayzed]

Wow. You really outpoured something here. Lovely

[ferousfinite]

Sounds like you are mad at someone lol .. sorry

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah
what ever is happening in the world...its just too stupid!
if this is a man age than prove it!
don't destroy...

other than this important partly get angry...sure im maddie everytime ....haha
its fine...say what you wanna say...let us see how brave you are!

[ferousfinite]

Makes me glad I know who Monsanto is ...

[Laminators Dubai]

hummmmm.............
thanks anyway^^

[Vivek K. Tiwari]

As other reviews says so will i "Loved the ending very much."

[Laminators Dubai]

don't read what they say
tell me what you feel...

thanks glitch

[Vivek K. Tiwari]

feeled the same even more pleased reading it ....

[Laminators Dubai]

wow
that's cool. more than i though! XDXD

[Eddie Phillips]

Creative and thought provoking at the end. Great poem. -Eddie

[Laminators Dubai]

May Im just a glitch or fugitive but sure Im creative and all....
My people say that i am provoking...for a human its good i guess....but feels used by thoughts....
Thanks Eddie ! ^^

[Ally Monique]

love love love the ending! It made the piece that much more powerful

"we are perfectly MANAGED
and we are the Best
then why do you fail?
why do you cry?
why is your skin is pale?
you think its the End of this tale?
no!
it cant be!
because to end it
at least we have to start."

you couldnt have said it better, I really enjoyed reading this one, thanks for sharing!

[Inda]

Brilliant and sweet! Keep it up!

[Laminators Dubai]

Thanks inda...Im happy you liked it^^

[Jack...]

Very cleverly done my friend. Indeed, to finish one must first start.

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah
thats what makes me keep calm and study first...for not to be last in the exams...lolread moreyeah
thats what makes me keep calm and study first...for not to be last in the exams...lol
thank you jack...^^