look mommy!

when i was a kid... but the other half is my today...

store in
store out
look mommy!
what i bought!?
one candy for you
one for nick*
and one dad
but look
a pen
that uncle on the side of road
give me that
is that good or bad?

Author's Note

nick...my brother's nickname...
i love candy stores...i actually do that....
thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Izabe143]

I like how it has a childish side to it.

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Glad to see your writing smiles

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks you so much! ^^

[koty bell]

Haha ha that's awesome glitch...great write:)

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks you so much! ^^