HUMAN HEART

help it to beat again....

its in the sky
ground it
its broken
i found it
its not looking good
lets round it
its not beating
someone pound it
its a human heart
again sound it...

Author's Note

hey ghouls...ground means grab it...round means take a look at it...again sound it means lets help this heart to beat again...its bit of weird but after reading sooo many heartbroken writers i thought it will be cool...have fun bye...

Reviews

[Akshay Rawal]

The less revealing it is , the more effective it becomes. Direct messages are what we give everyday. To Present it in such mind-engaging way deserves exaltation.Loved it......

[Ren Black]

The repetition of the rhyme -ound works very well in this poem. It's well written.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks black......

[Rajiv Anand]

A lovely write up G.. You really have improved a lot in writing.. with every passing day.. God Bless

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha
my boy is back....
thank you..~xoxoxoxoxo~
tell me if you want more....lol

[Rajiv Anand]

Hey thank you for making those best meanings just by scribbling the words. xoxoxo.. My pleasure to read..

[Laminators Dubai]

dont be so formal with me...you can eat me out...

[Rajiv Anand]

HA HA.. from where i should start eating..

[Laminators Dubai]

down there.................