hate, love & things like that

cant people stop fighting? there is no good in that...

dim light
or dark
ship
or ark
jelly fish
or shark
humanity will die
no matter what !
no matter where do come from
no matter what you are
no matter what you think
no matter whats your link
you are nothing but a human
like every one else
then why do you hate us?
then why are you kill the god gifted grace?
then why do you think that you are the best?
just think one time
that your way is wrong to get what you want
if your way is good then why didnt you win untill now
you cant be bad untill you dont what is good
so stop following tooth for a tooth
you really think that god is with you
you think that other dont deserve that life?
i dont think so...
you must have a heart...
did you drop it somewhere?
maybe we could help
just come with us
we have the guts
so
are you coming?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ren Black]

"You are nothing but human," so powerful and meaningful. This whole poem is very deep and well written. I think this poem is very insightful.

[Laminators Dubai]

oooooh oooook
thanks for this review^^

[Great Aunt Astri]

Glitch wonderful!!!!! You had me there shivering and shaking in my seat! But we are right, I think, a tooth for a tooth is old hat!

[Laminators Dubai]

bad is bad no matter how old...my mum says life is the most valueable thing...but give so can that others can live there is the biggest thing...but world never think like that...its frustrating...
thank you so much for review...^^

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are right, and I think all great teachings say the same thing. remember 'no greater love has man than he lay down his life for another' But life is precious and I think we should all respect that.