RED

please read PINK and VIOLET poems first...you get better read with this one...thanks...

red in love
black in hate
pick in weak
purple in seek
green in earth
blue in space
white in peace
yellow in case
mind change color
colors are reflector
of ones soul
of ones goal
now im red
red i see
its just not me
its a cry
its a far beyond pain
red will kill me up
and throwing me down
trying to wash it up
red wet me down
better violet
red make me attracted
now the hunter can see me...
gonna hunt me down...

Reviews

[William J. Marsh]

Once again glitch your words are exciting and intriguing. A nice girl with such an imagine, like Ron said; stay true to yourself and what you know to be good and true and leave the crazy stuff for your writing. Your good at it.

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha ha
thanks you...im laughing...
i just fascinating......i am crazy after all...read moreha ha ha
thanks you...im laughing...
i just fascinating......i am crazy after all...
but i real im a good girl...just 1000% obsessed...thats all....
thanks ^^

[ron]

You are a very passionate girl glitch. make the hunters work for you, do not give your self up to them with out a fight.

[William J. Marsh]

Awesome advice Ron! I take it you might have a daughter?

[ron]

Yes I do. She will be 18 this year.

[William J. Marsh]

Awesome! Nothing much greater than a proud and involved dad! I see that you watch out for glitch
read moreAwesome! Nothing much greater than a proud and involved dad! I see that you watch out for glitch
so I knew that you had to be a proud and involved dad.

[ron]

I do look at her as a daughter I guess.