KILLER...

filled with thoughts trying to letting them out...

Was a day,
now it’s night.

 My notebook is open wide.
Tip of the pen is hide in the cap,
he had the map.

You are a writer too,
you can understand me,
might.

it’s been the whole day,
 I’m keep changing my sight,
but the weather of the inside me is tight.

I’m fighting with thoughts,
like a brave knight !

I will not sleep,
until I kill the words,
to drink the blood of meaning.
I love that kind of sinning.

Then…
I will not lose the crown,
how can I lose this height?
I just wanted to write.
Now I’m a ...

Reviews

[Paul Sherlock]

took me awhile to understand it, but once you ponder the meaning it hits you.like the imagery

[Laminators Dubai]

oh. hey thank you :) i was just stopped by to look at the things here. that i can see people still reading me...that feels just great. i really miss this place.
yeh i know i write a bit gua-doy...
thanks again ' ' )

[Pankaj Lohia]

its niec.. atleast ur not a glitch anymore :p

[Laminators Dubai]

no...i still glitch...and
thank you! ^^

[Pankaj Lohia]

no now ur a killer :p

[Laminators Dubai]

ooooooooooooh
ooooooooooook

[♪Barklight♪]

Brilliant imagery and you sure captured that meaning ^^ awesome glitch

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!!! ^^

[Sami Khalil]

"than i will not lose the crown
how can i lose this hight? ( Height ???)

i just wanted to write
now im a killer..."

A splendid read and write. An interesting one...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

i post it from phone so mistyping i common...glad that u noticed it...
thanks for everything!!!!!!!
XOXOXOXO

[Sami Khalil]

No problem...You are welcome...:)